running fast
reaching a foreign destination
yet nothing changes
mental walls remain unaffected by physical location
traveling further my limbs feel heavy
my body exhausted
my mind continues to race
my body exhausted
my mind continues to race
no matter where I go
I can not escape myself
Ellie- I'm looking for a bit more here by now. You were to have posted the revised 'witness' poem w/ the original and a couple thoughts about the revision. This poem stays very abstract which limits the emotional impact.
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